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Undeclared Words by melanneart Undeclared Words by melanneart
I wrestle within myself trying to find the words,
silently watching as the empty pages drift away.
But, it's already too late.
I have lost your heart to another.



I Must admit, I don't think this is one of my best, and I'm still not 100% sure if I'm happy with it lol ( I did change the background a lot). Maybe it's because I used a male model for the first time and I'm finding it difficult to get use to :D Anyway, I hope you like it!

My entry for faestock's 'Paper' Creative Challenge fav.me/d4x27xk


Stock Used
Model: Random-Acts-Stock fav.me/d1qutds
Falling Paper: faestock faestock.deviantart.com/art/Fa…
Background: UmbraDeNoapte-Stock fav.me/d2h9g1l
Sky: night-fate-stock fav.me/d1ulcwm
Grass & Water: moonchild-ljilja fav.me/d2k84wy fantasybackgroundsstore.com/in… (1st one)
Tree: mahdesigns-stock mahdesigns-stock.deviantart.co… | spacenewt fav.me/dnu4jw


Featured: fav.me/d4yfg22

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Undeclared Words BA by melanneart

Melissa Anne / melanneart (formerly mahdesigns). All rights reserved. My work may not be reproduced, edited, copied, printed, sold, published, uploaded or reproduced on other sites without my express written permission.

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:iconlaffforever:
ok, first off is I have to say this is one of the best pictures I've seen on DA so far..the light completely captures the mood, and the papers floating away gives a sense of sadness..very beautiful and touching.
I always thought being at a loss of words is frusturating, but now it seems sweet, yet sad.
The texture on the tree bark is very detiled and precise, and the rippled water gives a sense of movement. The papers as they fade away gives aches of memory, which fills the viewer with wonder. Awesome job, and we hope to see more of this.
----AJ
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PekeDevil Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's great!!!
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:iconmelanneart:
melanneart Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!
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Kjdragon Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
first handsome man. second awesome background third love the theme:love:
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melanneart Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you! :love:
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Kjdragon Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
always a pleasure:D
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angemuet Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
I will have to take a look at your gallery to see how you do with female models to compare how you did with this male model because they must be uber sensational because this is one of the most fabulous works i've seen with a male model. I absolutely LOVE it! a def fav and my vote for the contest by far!
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melanneart Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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angemuet Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
you're very welcome :hug:
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Duckforcover Featured By Owner May 1, 2012   Digital Artist
Yes very good work, like the way you have done the skin tones and the washed out colour of this piece.
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melanneart Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much!
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KaysThoughts Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
wonderful and really lovely work :heart:
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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dmaabsta Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
This looks great.
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks!
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MirellaSantana Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
beautiful work, i like the soft colors!!
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!!
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EmanuelGreatGod Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful work!!
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!!
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Zicsi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
nice work
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks!
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Gild-a-Lily Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:clap: great work. Best of luck in the challenge :fingerscrossed:
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks so much! :heart:
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LuzTapia Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Excellent dear! :D
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you! :D
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LuzTapia Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Welcome! :D
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Dani-Owergoor Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sometimes simple can be more efficient than the fine.
Your work is wonderful and perfectly conveys the message.
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much :love:
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Dani-Owergoor Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
You're welcom, dear!
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MariamMohammed Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist




Beautiful work :rose:,
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you :rose:
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AllexDA Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is awesome!
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks! :D
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AllexDA Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome :)
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Marazul45 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:clap:
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks!
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Marazul45 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was a pleasure for me!:iconmahnamahnaplz::iconbutterfly1plz::iconbutterfly2plz::iconbutterfly3plz::iconbutterfly4plz::iconbutterfly5plz:
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Carmen-Ioneanu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
Beautiful scene! :heart:
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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Carmen-Ioneanu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
My pleasure! :hug:
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MeemieArt Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superbe, j'aime beaucoup!!
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!
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Dream-SweetDreams Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012   Digital Artist
Beautiful done dear :heart:
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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Dream-SweetDreams Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012   Digital Artist
Your very welcome :hug:
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dienel96 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
very beautiful!
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!
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dienel96 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
most welcome! :hug:
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FP-Digital-Art Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lovely :)
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melanneart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you :love:
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FP-Digital-Art Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;)
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