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April 25, 2012
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Undeclared Words by melanneart Undeclared Words by melanneart
I wrestle within myself trying to find the words,
silently watching as the empty pages drift away.
But, it's already too late.
I have lost your heart to another.

I Must admit, I don't think this is one of my best, and I'm still not 100% sure if I'm happy with it lol ( I did change the background a lot). Maybe it's because I used a male model for the first time and I'm finding it difficult to get use to :D Anyway, I hope you like it!

My entry for faestock's 'Paper' Creative Challenge

Stock Used
Model: Random-Acts-Stock
Falling Paper: faestock…
Background: UmbraDeNoapte-Stock
Sky: night-fate-stock
Grass & Water: moonchild-ljilja… (1st one)
Tree: mahdesigns-stock… | spacenewt


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Undeclared Words BA by melanneart

Melissa Anne / melanneart (formerly mahdesigns). All rights reserved. My work may not be reproduced, edited, copied, printed, sold, published, uploaded or reproduced on other sites without my express written permission.

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ok, first off is I have to say this is one of the best pictures I've seen on DA so far..the light completely captures the mood, and the papers floating away gives a sense of sadness..very beautiful and touching.
I always thought being at a loss of words is frusturating, but now it seems sweet, yet sad.
The texture on the tree bark is very detiled and precise, and the rippled water gives a sense of movement. The papers as they fade away gives aches of memory, which fills the viewer with wonder. Awesome job, and we hope to see more of this.
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PekeDevil Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's great!!!
melanneart Jun 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you!
first handsome man. second awesome background third love the theme:love:
melanneart May 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you! :love:
always a pleasure:D
I will have to take a look at your gallery to see how you do with female models to compare how you did with this male model because they must be uber sensational because this is one of the most fabulous works i've seen with a male model. I absolutely LOVE it! a def fav and my vote for the contest by far!
melanneart May 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
you're very welcome :hug:
Duckforcover May 1, 2012   Digital Artist
Yes very good work, like the way you have done the skin tones and the washed out colour of this piece.
melanneart May 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much!
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